/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2303906
your line weight is explaining all the wrong things in the wrong places as in >>2303883 you have used a heavy pressure line to describe where his tank top meets his shoulders, but this makes it look as if the shirt has a large black boarder to it or deep dark as fuck shadows surrounding it, that or deep gashes directly into his arms.
line weight is everything when using a brush to draw, all im saying is perhaps use a pen untill you know how shadows fall, like the way you have his right leg in total shadow and the top remains pure white makes no sense.

>pic related, one of my own brush pen jobs, and even i think that the brush pen is still too far away skill wise to justify using it.

http://nakedoats.tumblr.com/

>>2168079
same, this is now a brush pen thread.

trying to dra with ink while not using any refs.
its harder than i thought. kim makes it looks so easy.
how the fuck do i cat?