/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1543271
I just realized what I thought was the ship is a planet in the bg. Anyways, in the paintover I did it as though that whole shape were the ship. I thought that since they are walking away from the wreck they can be further from the ship in the image, and can be exiting the composition (partially cropped out, and facing the very border of the painting). In your image they are visually overlapping the ship/walking towards it almost. I'd separate the two visually more...I used the shadow of the ship to show that there is still some connection though so it doesn't feel like two images in one or something.

I also tried to make the ship have a couple recognizable elements to it--a fin and an engine exhaust thingy.