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>>1704741
>perhaps i fixed the facial, head, neck, and clavical anatomical issues you had?
Somewhat. I think the biggest issue right now is that the eyes are a bit high, making the nose seem longer than it is. I tried my hand at a redline, focusing on the skull construction so that the eye socket is placed correctly. It's far from perfect, and I probably altered the likeness you were going for, but hopefully it gives you some ideas at the very least.