/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4841063
Anon, don't be afraid of making mistakes.
Keep going, you'll eventually get where you want to go.
Although, if you don't mind a few more nitpicks:
The left arm holding the head of the girl is too small, out of place and the pose is unnatural.
You shouldn't be able to see the deltoids from that perspective.
Also, If he was going for a choke, he'd do it like pic related.
The girl's arm that is free is barely visible.
I guess you were going for
>she's holding herself unto the dude's head
or something but make her do something else. more consistent with the pose and current action.
The other hand shouldn't be there because of the tail, wrapped around her, pressing her shoulder and arm inwards/behind.
An easy fix imo would be to push the leg outward and make her forearm visible and hand grip to the tail.
Lastly, the hand gripping the leg.
Make it bigger to be more consistent with the dude's proportions and perspective and push it down towards the thighs.

Take my words with a grain of salt though
It's your work after all, if my words help you, i'm glad they do.