/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>7209072
Hey friends i was hoping for a redline on this girl i drew. I just wanted to see how close i was to someone who knows theire stuff. Particularly, i wanted to know if her shoulders are too muscular, but I'll take anything. Thank you so much in advance!

Back again friends this one took an hour to draw.
My tablet is fixed at the moment for reasons i dont understand. But i am not mad at it. In fact i wanted to test my skills and how they might have improved since I had switch to traditional. I am increasingly proud of how i draw womens faces and this picture is reason for this. I like the simplicity of the face while still communicating a seductive and appealing look.
I am not too sure on the rest of the anatomy, even i dont feel too bad about it. She maybe a bit too muscular in the shoulders. I think i will post on the /beg/ thread to see if an anon can show me how close or far i was. I was also trying to draw the natural forms of the female near the crotch, not... what might seem like or than a fupa. I apologize for that lol