/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4953675
Darker shadows in the farthest points from light. That building should be darker and almost black. Sky should be a lot blacker unless it is dusk and it just got dark out. Hair highlights bug me. Hair should have separate lines at highlight even if they are fat chunky ones to match the cartoonish art style. Good for you for getting so far with making your webcomic. Personally I cheat with making something at night and do the proper colors and then cover everything with a top layer of dark pale blueish gray with like 70% or lighter opacity. Then erase over bright spots where light hits. Pic related is a example of how I cheated to make it darker without trying to figure out the perfect colors that match what they would be in the darkness.