/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6518774
>go over the line multiple times
sure, but in barely visible thin light lines so that you dont compromise the final art output. And after the proportions, symmetry and shape meets desired outcome you are supposed to make solid confident dark line to finalize the contour. Are you using correct pencil? You should have at least two: one hard (H) and one very soft (B with high number). Experiment which one you like better for sketching. For final outline you want to use the B because it can produce dark tone easily.

In your pic i can see the sea of lines and none of them is final. this is easily making your output way worse for no reason.

And feel free to pick more interesting things to draw and practice on. Shoes, tanks, cars, houses, castles, guns... its as the book said, almost all man made objects are basically just spheres and cubes.

>>6518556
kek. making hand made notes is one of the most efficient ways how to learn things, thats why.

Hello beg, check out my tonk! Next chapter is introduction to figure drawing which is also last chapter of the book.

>>6503078
frog cute but you didnt use any dark value colors and as such it looks a bit uncanny. The general idea is that your pic should look good even when displayed as gray scale. Enjoy the stay.
>>6502805
see the reply above, same issue: didnt use full value range
>>6503047
is this from memory? i kneel
>>6503003
very spooky
>>6502903
>box-man
>cylinders and spheres
you failed
>>6502776
thats why you want to do some beg book first before you jump into the advanced books. These teachers are drawing for decades and teach mostly students who were filtered by school entrance exams. They cannot even imagine how nodraw and beg people are like
>>6502656
it is coming out nicely, just keep refining it
>>6502547
despite its simplicity i dig her!
>>6502453
dont rush anon! it is better to do one good pic in two sittings rather than 2 lmao ones
>>6501835
that hatching is like straight out of the old books of old masters. I kneel
>>6501711
4th result on qwant.com after i typed loomis books. Learn how to google anon!
https://www.alexhays.com/loomis/
>>6501602
i like how you mentally separated fundies and studies as if you can do one but not the other at the same time. Pick a beg book, read and draw. You can do it anon!
>>6501508
you are better at it than you think, just lazy with the details
>>6501295
the dude is drawing alien birth coom porn. Of course tits are important. In fact they are one of the most important part of the picture! If there is ONE thing coom artists need to master, its drawing perfect tits from any angle or situation!