/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1705910
the way you've shaded the pectoralis major makes it look bulbous but theres supposed to be a flatter(or maybe even concave) area below the pit of the neck

Also watch where the pecs insert into the arm. Deltoids are thinner at the top than they are closer to the middle. Also the figure looks like hes shrugging (i think thats unintentional), so fix the forms of the clavicle and the trapezius.

That neck looks odd.