/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Looks terrible, her colors are artificial and the lighting has nothing to do with the background.
There was a lot of construction, but not enough care about the overall shapes/silhouette, you're thinking only in 3D and forgetting the 2D element.
The biggest tellers are the hanging sash and the mouth. It looks work was put into making it 3D, but not into making it pleasant.

The eye looks painted on, because anime eyes need to be abstracted to work.

Also is it just me or are the bottles slanted on the shelf? Why?

All in all, an ambitious project, you got it maybe 80% right, but the things you didn't get right made it uncanny.

I'm guessing you used a 3D model for this, because the sense of perspective doesn't match the lower quality of individual elements.

In that case, it's more like you got 30% right, left 50% in the hands of 3D and now you have the most important 20% to grind.

Make sure to watch these for a basic understanding on what you're doing:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7fLV5ezO64w
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gwLQ0cDb4cE

>>4297177
That face looks like a My Little Pony