/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3258532
It's out of context so I don't really think it's fair to judge your characters too much, but nothing stands out about them in particular. The beanie guy doesn't even talk, nor does the old lady.

The main character has a design that is very generic. Messy hair and shonen whatnot.

Also the bandages dissapear and reappear at random, check the panels on the right page carefully.

Main character has his mouth open the same way in every panel.
I drew this picture of him, I would suggest you change the freckles, four on each side, while being easy to draw, looks odd. I think having a heavily freckled face would be cute and visually interesting. I also suggest you add in reflections to his hair, it looks smooth and black, therefor should probably be shiny.