/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1771354
>>1771391
Someone did a decent paintover already, but I wanted to try one too. Some points I noticed:

- Her eyes are weird. Why are her lower eyelids curved upward?

- As the other anon demonstrated, her nose is a bit too big if you're going for a "cutesy" look.

- Similarly, the shadows you painted on her face are also a bit too harsh for a cute girl. Go for a softer feel (I'm assuming this is what you're aiming for).

- Your lighting is inconsistent. Judging from the shadow under her nose, seems like light should be coming from above. Her boobs don't look like they're lit from above in your painting. Her arms and body at points 2 and 3 should be darkened in respect to that lighting.

- At point 1, her sleeves make no sense. I tried connecting her arm under your drawing so you can see why those folds look a bit wonky.

Hope that helps.