/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4088872
Ok, but there are two problems:
First, with a full figure shot either you make something graphical ( the f.figure overlaps other panels) or you put some simple bg. It looks like there is a lot of unused space. With close up it's ok to use simple background because we are used to movies, and usually the bg is out of focus for those shots, but in other cases it may look strange.
Second, a bg, even a simple one, makes things clearer: if we draw a character and in the next page this same character is too small, it may be harder for the reader to recognize him, but if you put something in the bg to make it clear that it's the same place, it's easy for the reader connect the dots.

Anyway, I made a quick shitty layout of how I would do it.
Superboy he's saying "I'm back" so I made him landing in the first panel.
Panel 1-2-3-4 have the same camera. 5 is a slightly low angle shot+zoom.