/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2866596
>two pairs of heads in the same angle
>two pairs of upper bodies in the same angle
>that shiiit foreshortening (look at more comic artists for help)
>dude in front and dude to the left have two different arm sizes/lengths (fixed with foreshortening practice)
>using curvilinear perspective to hide mistakes

I THINK that you would be much better off trying to nail nice rhythmic curves and gestures. These poses are quite stiff and could use some character behind them. The reptilian dude in the back i sort of in the right direction.
It seems like these guys are just posing in space. They don't have purpose to be performing the action they are. Are they lost? Confident? Tired? Powerful? How do you express these ideas?

Right now all I'm seeing is a sausage fest of characters I don't really care about.

Hahaha, you'll be back.

They always come back.