/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Man fuck figure drawing, still waiting for that epiphany when everything starts to makes sense. Right now it feels like a hit or miss thing, one day my figures look at least believable in space, and then the other I can't even get the gestures going.

>>2520993

Not bad for the first attempt, the point of the exercise is to use 3d forms to build these silly faces, and you seem to get that. The parts that look worse are the ones where you're are forgetting about the 3D aspect of the form and just drawing something on top of the paper, instead of the ball that you started with. It's a difficult thing to undertand at first, but it will ome naturally the more you draw..

Also some people here will tell you that this book in particular can be skipped over in favor of something a little more in depth as "drawing the head and hands" but you decide.

>>2520618

Construction feels weird, particularly on the right side (her left cheek) where it looks too big. The mouth seems kinda small for me. Still a good try, just work a lil bit more on your construction and you'll be fine

>>2520554

Mouth is too low, lips are nigger big and jaw is protruding a little too much. More Loomis-hampton-asaro-whatever