/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4044818
>>4046695
So this is the final little explanation. I just wanted to try my hand at composition in order to tell a better story and make the scene more interesting. Not to downplay your piece, I didn't know exactly what it was about but I played around with the same theme. I just thought about what this big rock is. It attracts a fine light source to it, and birds sit perched to it. I gave it a happy mood with groups of birds and leaves shining in the light over it. It adds detail in the area as well as contrast. It tells us a little story, while leaving questions. It gives us a sense of mystery. I hope this helps.