/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Didn't get any replies in the last thread.
Does this pose and perspective look natural? Anything that I should change construction wise before I'll render it out?

>>4582797
I think the nipple on the breast on our left should point more to the side. And this wobbly line above is kinda weird.
>What do you think of my inking?
Well it still needs a lot of finishing and cleaning up. Your hatching doesn't follow the forms that well - on breasts you should've used curved lines instead of straight ones for example. Not bad otherwise.

Thoughts? Is the post natural looking and in correct perspective?