/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4106752
Korra guy here, someone is always unhappy.
When I respond with some advice without an image it's >what do you know crab, pyw reeeeeeee
When I attach something to my response so it's not coming out of a black hole I get >WTF not a beg reeeeeee
Pic related.

Also like it says in the original image, copying from other artists makes you seem a 100 times better than you really are.
So I don't think I'm nearly as good as you could come to believe from just seeing that.

>>4106750
Yes, though it depends what you want to achieve, essentially the situation isn't reading very well is what I'm trying to say.
I think you were trying to go for something seductive/ physically intimate, but atm it just looks like they fell over one another and the one on top is trying to get up while the lower one is awkwardly holding on for some reason.