/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Still suck but I feel like today's training was really good, Was able to notice the lack of motion and "life" of the things I've drawn so far like the first one where everything is stiff.
And I have to care less about correcting wrong lines, most of the time when drawing on a tablet or paper I spend erasing random lines because they didn't come out like I wanted.
I will try to sketch more poses and try work on other things next week. Also need to work using my shoulder better.