/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4486723
Adding to what the other guy said. The joint where the humerus connects to the shoulder is mostly just bone and skin, and should be (more or less) directly above the center of the arm. Your shoulder curve starts a wee bit too early.

I'd either bend the arm outwards some to make the joints meet, or you could push the "point" of the shoulder wideer out to meet the arm. All in all though, nice job my man.