/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6965985
okay so yeah, you just confirmed you literally don't even know what line weight means. god I fucking hate it here

>>6262626
>>6262626
Not bad, but it needs more of a sense of depth. The lit areas are so thin that they pretty much disappear in the thumbnail, so they don't really make that much to convey volume.

Try making the lit areas slightly bigger, and adding a border of penumbra between them and the darker shadows. Also, I suggest that you attempt to vary your lineweights. Try making the contours of the objects situated on the foreground, as well as those that are in shadow, thicker, and those on the background, along with those that are facing the light sources, thinner. This will help to add more interest and depth to your drawing, even when using flat colors.

>>6262626
Not bad, but it needs more of a sense of depth. The lit areas are so thin that they pretty much disappear in the thumbnail, so they don't really make that much to convey volume.

Try making the lit areas slightly bigger, and adding a border of penumbra between them and the darker shadows. Also, I suggest that you attempt to vary your lineweights. Try making the contours of the objects situated on the foreground, as well as those that are in shadow, thicker, and those on the background, along with those that are facing the light sources, thinner. This will help to add more interest and depth to your drawing, even when using flat colors.

>>2943903
Learn into line weight

>>2664666
ayy checked
as you can tell by my typing, not the anon you replied to but

line weight is easily one of the most overlooked fundamentals out there

Line quality, complemented with shading, helps modify our perception of the "3D Illusion". Quite difficult to explain, but just one of the many subtle things that can change an art piece dramatically.