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>>6824455
Many problems in your illustration.
What's the light source?
The sky and mountain on the back seem to indicate that the sun is at the top left, but the the road indicate that it is overcast, the pillar seems to be getting light from the left, while the character is getting light from the right. WHERE'S THE LIGHT COMING FROM? I don't know if u sued multiple references with different light sources, but you gotta choose one light source and stick with it for all the illustration.
All your values are really close. Even know that your lights are all over the place, I can hardly differentiate light from shadow.
I edited the illustration with multiply and overlay layers because I'm lazy. It lstill ooks muddy and awful, but I'm not interested in trying to understand nor paint over all your illustration.
Even looking really bad, you can tell my version has a clearer light source and it's easier to differentiate lights from shadows.

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