/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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>>5135313
good, but strikes me as a bit too slow.
>>5135267
u r being too articulate about other peoples flaws. This isn't the 'methods of discourse' general, it's the 'animation' general. Just keep saying things about animation not about the character of people who insult you & maybe u will catch less insults.
>>5134966
I agree with what you say about exaggeration, but I think it is pointing in the direction of managing audience focus, which applies to all visual art, but especially when story elements need to be conveyed. If someone is looking at the wrong place & misses a detail it can ruin stuff. So you gotta make sure. Make sure they see. See what you are trying to make them see.

I think gif loops are a new kind of medium. Like with a still image, the eye can circulate the thing multiple times, but like in animation, there is a flow to elements on the screen...

Anyone got hot resources on managing focus?