/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

i might be completely retarded about how im doing this but i sketch out the building on the left with intention of drawing it in a more dynamic perspective, such as the two refs in the pic. so to 'understand' the perspective i drew the long cube and started rotating it upwards until it got to something i wanted. basically what i, going for is 'person is standing in between the stairstep corners/negative space' looking up. are the circled prism adequate for conveying the sketch and keeping all the information about the subject? or am i just doing completely retarded shit

tldr drew my own ref, how to make interesting perspective