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This isn't the best image to talk about this but it's a page from my sketchbook. I'm not sure if it's ok to talk about concepts here, I'm a concept artist, but I'd like feedback about this idea.

I've been thinking of doing a small storyboard/comic, reinventing the idea of She Hulk for over a year now. Since I'm out of college now, I can start focusing on personal projects now.

Instead of someone getting the gamma radiation to transform into a Hulk, I want to make it a virusfrom another planet that was contained and laid dormant in the Earth for millennia. The virus containers would resurface, being completely sentient, and take over a person's body, transforming them into a She Hulk.