/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

WIP of characters, but best version of the characters. From right to left of the main characters:
Alex: Steadfast human and a believer in true justice, has found himself as the protege of the Horseman of Death
Ramm: An Asura demon obsessed with self-improvement and is the strongest of Suspect squad. Is considered the runt of his family
Kelth: A Baku demon who is considered a loser and a perv. In actuality is just socially awkward.
Kate: A succubus who has taken an interest in the punk human culture and is a sarcastic "Queen bitch" to everyone
Mary-Anne: Succubus and future Matriarch of the Gothlyn clan. A warrior by heart and full of trauma regarding her history with Earth. Is assigned as Alex's bodyguard.

I'll be lurking the thread for any monsters, they are my favourite things to redraw.

WIP but still, is there anything worse than going through a drawing thinking "Hey this looks alright" but then realize all of the mistakes when getting to colour?
Ah well, at least it is another drawing of these characters I can compare to my last attempts to see what's improved, what's degraded and what is still an issue.