/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4851619
Anon here back again, you did well, it does look different Look at them side by side. Your newer on has way more form definition and especially the hair looks much better

The only thing is kind of weird is that you are using too many light sports.The lights come from all angles as if she is sitting in a studio and being lit from multiple angles using spotlights. Now, this is NOT a problem in itself, highlight spots are there to grab attention and focus it where you want it, and also to describe a surface. The problem comes when the highlight spots are either overused and thus they loose their strength in grabbing attention or their placement is inconsistent with each other. This is why it helps to decided the direction light source(s) before rendering so that you know where they should be.

I made another overpaint (will post next) where I actually tweaked the eyes that is personal preference but also put down one stronger main light source from to top left and tried to adjust the shading on the body to match. It is a sloppy job cause I didn't have layers or the time but I hope it gets the idea across.