/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4022561
The weave of the sweater looks to be very loose(because the shoulder). Perhaps it should easily stretch, spanning across between the breasts instead of almost tight to her body form. I would expect the weave itself to get slightly wider where it stretches. Without the weave pattern widening, the garment appears to be cut that shape.

Btw, the sharper the folds in her sleeves, the more starched it looks.

Also I can see the deepest part of the fabric, even while it's turning away from the camera, making the edges flat. You could just show the outermost edge of the surface as it turns away.

Her hand positions look to me like she has fabric draped between her arms, awaiting inspection by a client.

Lookin' real good overall.