/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6264338
I couldn't help myself and tweaked some stuff that bother me.
First at all if you going for wide shoulders you need to be sure they are angled correctly,
on your drawing her left arrm looks a bit dislocated.
Belt is angled in wrong direction, even if its possible to appear like that its not good for flow.
Remember about volume of head and hair and proper placments of face features.
I mean yours all alright but not perfect. Also some anatomy can be improved.
Oh and thumb on ground hand is a bit too long, i didn't change it.