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I’m not very good myself so take what I say with a grain of salt, but I’ve seen your works around and I really think you could benefit from properly learning gestures, your works tend to suffer from awkward looking poses. In this one the top half is fine but the bottom half feels like she’s bowlegged or something and makes the le epik pose unintentionally funny. It’s as though you took the two different poses in picrel and mashed them together, there’s a real uncanny feeling to it and no flow. You clearly already know how to render anime in an appealing way but your awkward figures (and sometimes anatomy) are really holding you back. Pic is flipped but you get the idea, I’m too lazy to resave.

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