/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3657245
I got home and I felt I needed to comment on this, because so much work was done on it. It would have been good if the torso were to follow the more natural curve and pelvis and upper torso were to fit together more tightly. I basically just moved pelvis up and to our right a little. Redrawn the crotch region because what you currently have look more like if the legs was spread apart. Take it with a grain of salt though, still might be good to find some sort of reference for this sort of pose. It would have been good if something like anatomy were to be tackled while it was just line art, because when you started coloring and shading there is a strong inertia against going back to make big changes.