/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4997182
the proportions are much better as the other anon pointed out but the issues here are many. the most obvious thing is the breasts, which are completely in the wrong place and misshapen. anatomy is missing on the arm, the other shoulder doesn't line up with this pose at all and as a result the other arm ends up in the wrong place and much longer than her left. the hips aren't accounted for, the feet don't rest properly on the ground (wrong perspective) and are both way too big. hope this helps, pay more attention and observe more carefully