/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

please bare in mind, i'm still learning the basics. I trying to get the fundamentals down to improve and find a style. I've always, for some reason, been fond of Hanna Barbara style.

That being said. As I work on personal pictures aside from studies and loomis. I find myself having a different "style" with each drawing but with a root style of "garbage"

This is an older picture, not by much, but alot I can see alot of flaws in it.

So any critiques would be great on how to maybe helping getting a better visual style.