/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6825736
I need to go sleep so I gotta keep it short.

The light source is hard to find even tough the neck clearly shows it is coming from top left this is also shown on the skelemans below. Yet she casts no shadow on the skellies below her. Tried to adjust the shadows to match at least that uniform light source first. Adding shadow to the hair, shoulder below hair, skellies leg knees arm that holds the shovel. I just added Multiply layer and just threw some extra dark spot on the skull below her.

Mouth and eyes are far too big leaving little space for the rest of the face, I shrunk them down slightly.

Skirt seems to be missing the part that covers her ass behind her so added in behind the front leg.

Added more shadows and light to the tiara to make it look more metallic.

The fishnet bracers seem flat so I made them reach past the edge of the arm slightly, same with the ankles and the clothes that are around her arms.

Added more shadows and lineart to the hand that is grabbing the spike above her.

Other minor stuff I can't remember.
Hope that helps, good night!