/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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>>5055786
Should be a little more clear this time around.

She's steadying herself on one hand and using her foot to push off the ground. Thinking of removing some of the frames in the middle, and replacing those with frames that cushion the two keys where her arms and limbs overlap.

The scene is that she's struggling to fit in with Imperial society, and this particular episode happens after some local girls bully her for being a dark elf. I was wondering if this scene in it's rough stages captured that, and if not, how I can improve the storytelling.

Fialni, her older half-sister who is much more versed in understanding Imperial society and the tribes that make it, is calling out to her. telling that it will be alright. Shirri does not want to listen; in Shirri's eyes, it's just too much for her to deal with.