/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4095933
This is the best way i can come up with showing it visibly. I'm not saying he needs to have a symmetrical pose as I drew here, but I am saying a few things.

If his upper arm on the far side is angled away, it has to be drawn on an angle that implies that. You have his shoulder lower on the far side, which implies that he's either leaning in a weird way where it would be hard to keep balance, or implies that the view on the upper half of his body is head on, not downward. The problem there is that everything else implies that it is downward. Your drawing would work if the background and legs weren't disagreeing with the torso. To fix this, draw the shoulders level in the same plane as the background (as i did here) and to show the far arm being angled away, draw the upper arm out from the body.

P.S, i hope you don't think i'm shitting on you. I like the drawing a lot. Just trying to help you make it a bit better.