/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3859402
That’s because in >>3859396, your eye starts at the upper right, go down the right page, and you’re led directly into the left page where the composition draws your eye back up the steps.

>>3857925 starts from the bottom without giving the reader a sign they should start there. Your eye tries to read left to right, the right to left, then you realize it goes bottom to top. Maybe it could be more readable in context? But as is, it’s an absolute mess. The bottom up portion in this also shows the same characters in various states of action, while in the manga it’s just one scene designed to draw your eye bottom up.