/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3099027
I rarely post but I give a shot. You need to step back when you draw to avoid these kind of mistakes. The two red lines next to each other in the both pictures are of same length. The length varies in between the two pictures, but they are relative in size. They indicate that your reflection in the mirror is about one fifth too wide which is a lot in portraiture, and it has little foreshortening. You can avoid this easily when you begin your drawing and draw the big shapes (the mask of the face/jawline and back of the skull) just loosely and sort of throw them in with big loose motions not committing to the contour lines (the silhouette so to speak), then step back and compare some distances. I also drew a red line where you should have separated your digastric plane (what comes underneath the chin) and your face by either adding tone or a line. I like how your wrist curves but it should either widen when going down, or be cropped out like in the photograph. The blue lines show the disproportions of the hands. The only "error" or fix that could be affected by stylistic choices is the mouth of the character. I wouldn't have connected the bottom of the lower lip that high, it flattens it drastically, although it looks surprisingly good on the right side drawing. Finally, the pink lines show that vertically you nailed the distances of the mouth and the eye, but their alignment is not parallel like in the real world.