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Anonymous Fri Nov 27 00:05:15 2020 No.5026327 [View]
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>>5026115
A bit exaggerated, but you kind of understand the concepts? I feel like what you're lacking is any sort of strong, hard light, your piece seems to be composed of only ambient/soft lights which are more often than not only a part of the overall lighting.
Look at pic related and compare it to your piece. note the differences in how the form is shown thru all the diferent types of "light"

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