/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6773724
I remember you! You're a great artist, and I shouldn't even be redlining you, so these are just minor points.

1. I think the arm is a bit tiny, especially the thickness of the upper arm. See if my sketch looks better to you or not
2. I think you should force the perspective of the head more, The way you drew the face is a bit flat imo
3. There's a 3 inch gap between the ASIS of the pelvis and the actual thigh. It's a subtle point that lends a bit of realism

>>6773649
>>6773654
great job on these... the lines you make tell the whole story. No need to write lengthy paragraphs like I do lol.. Also, I hope you can come back and do more redlines. I shouldn't be here either...

>>6773651
np!