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>>6216849
Aytan a cute.
That was a fun read! I love the art, it gives me a slightly retro vibe I find incredibly comfy. I did not like however that the dialogue could get at points too exposition-y, I think its better to let the reader discover a few things about the situation on their own as things go. That aside, definitely count me in for the ride.

I'm intrigued by the selection ceremony, how the magical machine seemed to stop for a while when Aytan went in and interrupted it. The whole class system is a bit off to be honest, I suppose the mages created the machine to read the natural affinity of a magic user and then provide the tools?

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