/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6643913
Anime/cartooning is a curious thing. It lets you cheat on certain details, yet requires more care for bigger elements. Without the aid of realistic rendering, the cartoon becomes almost solely reliant on placement, alignment, and size to communicate structure, at a degree of accuracy that viewers have become accustomed to, but cannot achieve easily. Even Vandruff, in a draftman podcast, sheepishly alluded to the animator's need for greater accuracy such that his usual advice for drawing lines were inadequate.
>And it comes off as overly constructed and rendered.
His faces often have a distorted walleye look to them, which should be addressed during construction. I think it needs more, not less.