/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4874351
There are just a bunch of small things that add up to a slightly wonky figure. I've gone and made the character a little stouter and chunkier for clarity, but the proportions aren't too important.
I think much of the figure looks rather formless or floaty, there there are a lot of vague connections that would benefit from some cross contour lines. The elbow joints on the arms especially, the lines become wispy and unclear. Define it clearly! Overlapping lines can really help the viewer understand what's going on with the forms, if a figure is all outlines it leads to ambiguity.
Skin tight clothing is a great tool for defining forms, too. The sleeves, cuffs, bottoms of shirts, pant holes, etc. should wrap around the form convincingly. It seems like a small thing, but it's very important, so don't skimp out on them.
I think you've got a strong foundation to build upon here. All my notes are fairly nitpicky and are things that come with practice and an understanding of the figure. Studying some basic anatomy would help you a bunch, just so you can start putting down some confident, well-informed land marks. I hope this helps