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>>	Anonymous Mon Jun 19 23:59:25 2023 No.6707526 [View] File: 169 KB, 1378x852, Anna's bold defense.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] panel from a practice comic I'm drawing. Still haven't added a background yet though

Anonymous Mon Jun 19 23:32:38 2023 No.6707509 [View]
File: 169 KB, 1378x852, Anna's bold defense.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Is there anything(apart from the hands being too small) that immediately sticks out that could use improvement, anons?
(Note: The foreground character is a 12 year old girl wearing a 6 foot 1 man's equipment, hence the seemingly much larger body)
Also, any good source for adding life to eyes? I know the method but they always come off as flat and lifeless.

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