/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3989100
>>3989108
>>3989111
>>3989117
Just saying, he WAS being overly critical, but jeez, don't sugarcoat the guy ffs.

>>3989098
Don't beat yourself up. Starting over on a piece is better than wasting time fixing up one, trust me. I've learned if I'm having issues with something, I take a step back and look at things that would help me get past my issues. This is a bias of mine, but since your lineweight is rather bold for what it is, try making the inner lines (the facial features for example) thinner than the outer lines (the hair) just so it doesn't stand out too much. The critical anon does have a point about too much detail, I usually make it so if I go for subtle lines I end up with subtle details. If you want eyelashes that pop out like that, don't close off the lines, it's all connected on the outside of the form (its silhouette. I'd also avoid "mirroring" the eye shape, I've seen this alot in anime but this only works from the front view. It usually works better for me when done at the more side view whenever possible.

Just keep practicing anon. Imo you're better at it than you think. I'd suggest balancing your line weights better so it doesn't seem the same all over.