/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2610440
hey dude i did some redlining for your artwork. Unfortunately i dont draw animoo so excuse my lacking stylization, but there are some things id like to point out to (You).
First of is a pose, i couldnt figure out what expression you were aiming for so i gave her that suprised , leaned forward look more than gonna-fall-off-the-rock-in-a-second one. Your piece looks like you didnt even bother to sketch the whole piece out before jumping into inking; always do that if you are not experienced enought (see Kim Jung Gi). Dont be afraid to go messy (see my red underdrawing). My inking is still pretty sloppy since i used regular photoshop brushes, but if you want to go for cleaner inking, use Adobe illustrator or sai or somethig more fit for the job (google inking tutorials for said programs). Learn about line weight and how to use it.
However i would recommend you go to the beginner thread first and get to the real basics (i mean loomis and shit) since your anatomy and sense of space is really lacking. Draw real people first since anime characters are based and influenced by them, it will help you greatly.
Also, "read the sticky", is all you have to know to get better.