/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4584022
Most people would likely ignore your posts because there's too much to fix. >>4584047
is right, because you really REALLY need to understand anatomy before you try weird posing, especially with 2 people.

My main issue is that the left arm is too big and no wrist, because I wrist is more than just a part where the arm gets thin for a bit, but a funny bone-y bit. The tacked on boobs are too large considering the size of her torso, and her "abs" should not be facing the viewer, but an angle because she's laying down. Also please look at how vaginas actually look like and where they are on the pelvis. The right arm is horribly shrunken, and the thighs are way too long. Also the outside edge of boobs usually lead into the armpit.

I have attached a redline, but honestly I'm not that good at this kinda angle, but I tried.