/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1803205
the hands are too small, everything is much too "flat", the hair is lacking enough detail and resembles melted marshmallow. the blanket she's wrapped it should contour around her legs and other body parts, instead of ballooning out into an oblong shape. there's no visible neck, she's missing an upper right arm, her breasts portrude out from the side of her torso instead of the center. That hat is way too big to fit on her head that way. The way her left shoulder comes out so far causes her to resemble quazimoto.