/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

okey doke, I'll crit you guy's stuff if you do me here >>2907499

>>2907555
They're not great, but the biggest problem is how stiff everything is, do life drawing.

>>2907601
legs are aight, whole shoulder girdle area feels wrong, the delt doesn't connect like that for one thing (on the sword arm), the triceps should be connecting the upper arm to the torso.

>>2907603
lewd pose, but again, arms are not your strong suit, work on them.

>>2907604
Honestly pretty great, could imagine this in a children's book easily, perhaps a bit scribbly here and there but I know how tricky ink is (I don't have the temperament for it).


>>2907605
Now this is good in certain ways, you've understood SOME principles, bot ignored others like line variation, everything is wavy.

Face seems a bit blobby, even for an anime aesthetic.

>>2907606
Lines very wavy, it's nice to have wavy lines, but offset them with some strong ones. Look up Senri Kita and the guy who did the Thorgal comics for inspiration and edification.