/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2519406
I feel obligated to respond to you again with a serious reply since I was a dick before.
First flip your drawing and you will see the imperfections on it... but I think you already know about them, specially since your tried to pull the trick angled pic of a drawing to mask the mistakes.

In general this drawing looks pretty, and it will look good to non artists, and your boyfriend's sister is going to like it for sure. As an artist, though, I can't say this is good on a technical level.

The features on her face are all a little misplaced, with the most glaring mistake being the eyes/eyebrows: her right eye is too far next to her cheek and her left eye is too close to the middle of the face giving the impression that it's the opposite eyebrow that goes too far to the middle of the face, as the other one barely covers the eye.
These little mistakes, and the fact that you don't use a lightsource and a variation of values to convey the form of her face shows you don't really think of your drawings in 3 dimensions, and that is what you are lacking to actually be good.

Again, it's a nice drawing for a hobbyist, but if you are taking this seriously you should look into the fundamentals again, study shapes, forms, values. Study anatomy of the face and body again, try drawing the same face from different angles and all that.