/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3298217
did you see my advice?
>>3297532
try a different approach. work with a larger brush. stop trying to draw the figure in components, and draw the whole gesture. before you even draw, take time to study the pose and determine a) where is the line of action, b) where is the weight? c) what information is most important to the pose? once you have a handle on the model, start with confident lines. avoid starting with a circle for the head, just draw your line of action. draw lines that support it and show where the weight is, where movement is, and where the pose is static. no scratching of feathering. like i said before, any line that you have to go over again is useless.

i can see you're really frustrated, but you're just doing the same thing over and over. try a different approach. look at different artist's gesture drawings. you might understand one of their perspectives better and have it click for you. :) good luck! if you have any other questions just ask.